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PostSubject: Rate my Haiku   1/2/2010, 6:40 pm

I'll beat you to death

beat beat beat beat beat beat beat

I'll beat you to death
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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/3/2010, 10:10 pm

Wow i see alot of built up anger in that lol Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/3/2010, 10:23 pm

I wanted to make it simple.
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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/3/2010, 10:54 pm

it was simply violent lol

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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/4/2010, 1:05 am

Indeed.
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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/4/2010, 1:14 am

Better done than said.
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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/5/2010, 6:26 am

It's so easy!
And simple..
Should be in a child poetry book.
Like a two year old.. b-b-beeat you do deeath!
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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/5/2010, 12:56 pm

Yeah published under the Dr Suess Label Laughing

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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/5/2010, 6:52 pm

I thought he died.
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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/30/2010, 11:46 pm

It made me laugh.
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PostSubject: Re: Rate my Haiku   1/31/2010, 8:38 pm

lol, Wth.

Wudda ya mean by '' beat '' Embarassed

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