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PostSubject: Our self-conbustion   1/2/2010, 11:11 pm

Is feeding itself more and more until all of what we know and love is tarnished and gone... So I wrote

A moment to slide
A minute to hide
Vacancy split
A gargantuan hit
Faced with facts
Elements and stacks
Opened by broken hearts
All from the start
A free and deadly enemy
Coming swiftly and endlessly
Approaching in the fast lane
Time to pay
For going straight insane
A whisper unheard
A flightless bird
An all world assessment
From a turbocharged impressment
Soon the hills will spread
Air will weave like thread
Here comes the hour
A catastrophic power
To rein and shower
This is extermination
Say hello to extinction
A black day to tell
Unawakened to dwell
As humanity looks up
Oh what will it reveal...
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PostSubject: Re: Our self-conbustion   1/4/2010, 2:51 pm

hmm.. humanity will reveal their own destruction? that's what i got from it. Curiosity killed the cat.

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PostSubject: Re: Our self-conbustion   1/4/2010, 4:24 pm

Great Opinion Josh! I liked what It meant to you, but what type of destruction perhaps could it be? C'mon people what do YOU think?
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PostSubject: Re: Our self-conbustion   1/5/2010, 4:53 pm

fiaman wrote:
Great Opinion Josh! I liked what It meant to you, but what type of destruction perhaps could it be? C'mon people what do YOU think?

Obviously,the types of destruction could me caused by:
1.NUKES(World War 3 or other)
2.Scientists(obviously they were talkin on a channel on what would it take to BLOW UP THE EARTH)
3.I dunno

Anyways earth will be destroyed by someone or something someday,and we will be born as,either aliens from another world or their planet's animals.Who knows...
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PostSubject: Re: Our self-conbustion   1/5/2010, 10:20 pm

DarkKingBernard wrote:
fiaman wrote:
Great Opinion Josh! I liked what It meant to you, but what type of destruction perhaps could it be? C'mon people what do YOU think?

Obviously,the types of destruction could me caused by:
1.NUKES(World War 3 or other)
2.Scientists(obviously they were talkin on a channel on what would it take to BLOW UP THE EARTH)
3.I dunno

Anyways earth will be destroyed by someone or something someday,and we will be born as,either aliens from another world or their planet's animals.Who knows...

Ah right was I was thinking but all types into one.

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