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Fiaman
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PostSubject: sleep NEW   1/4/2010, 1:55 pm

Sleep
When time began
It quickly ended in my head
The scenery became faded
Like the bodie of me
I lied to myself
Myself and no one else
Yet the grounds still soft
Like a pitched cloth
My view is transforming
It feels discomforting
As I slowly go blind
I quickly come back to life
What I had seen
Was mearly a dream
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PostSubject: Re: sleep NEW   1/4/2010, 2:49 pm

ah, but you can sleep during the day too. lol Daydreams.

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PostSubject: Re: sleep NEW   1/4/2010, 4:21 pm

Daydreams are fun! Any more responses?
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PostSubject: Re: sleep NEW   1/6/2010, 6:33 pm

I like it!
Now if you'll excuse me..
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PostSubject: Re: sleep NEW   1/6/2010, 7:15 pm

Lol perfect smiley for the perfect poem.

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