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PostSubject: Lost Opportunities   1/13/2010, 10:01 pm

Hey guys rate this its my new poem

Lost Opportunities


A dormant calamity
I know the ending
But I'm in a state
Of such distant hate
One that I inflate
I can remember
The cold shivers
Brought by the swarm
Built by the storm
With no intent of reform
I am Unfortunately
Collapsing so suddenly
Because my mistakes
Left an earthquake
That put my sanity at stake
Cant believe I failed to shine
With so much time
Wasted in my prime
Knowing history cannot climb
I've lost my mind
How quick it seems
That all my schemes
Have begun a new regime
To nullify my dream
Right at the seams

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PostSubject: Re: Lost Opportunities   1/13/2010, 10:17 pm

now witch way r u going with this? are talking about someone on death row ?
or are u saying someone got caught cheating on his or her spouse?
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PostSubject: Re: Lost Opportunities   1/13/2010, 10:19 pm

Not why i wrote it chvy, but people take into fact that this is about someone on deathrow and re-read. after 10 days ill post why i wrote it. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Lost Opportunities   1/14/2010, 3:08 am

chvy wrote:
now witch way r u going with this? are talking about someone on death row ?
or are u saying someone got caught cheating on his or her spouse?
Guys chvy is new. Wink Hes my friend in crossfire. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Lost Opportunities   1/21/2010, 7:49 pm

Pretty good. I like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Lost Opportunities   1/21/2010, 8:01 pm

Real Good, I'm trying to find the meaning behind it but i see many.
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PostSubject: Re: Lost Opportunities   1/21/2010, 9:12 pm

Thanks stick and sparrow you guys really need to get into writing. When you write something yourself and let people see it, it shows what kind of style you're into. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Lost Opportunities   1/22/2010, 3:57 pm

I like it :-)
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PostSubject: Re: Lost Opportunities   1/23/2010, 6:51 pm

Thanks MH.

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