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PostSubject: The intelligent pig   2/16/2010, 10:51 am

Once upon a time, there was a little pig.
This little pig was not an ordinary pig, no, he was extraordinary.
He could think and speak, just like humans. But he didn't choose this faith.
He wanted to be like the other pigs. This is why he never showed how intelligent he actually was when there was a human around.
Because he knew that if he showed how intelligent he was and what he was capable of, his chances of becoming a normal pig would be zero.

One day, our little friend woke up and suddenly he had a great idea.
He would invent a machine that swapped his brain with the brain of another pig. The pig who he was going to swap his brain with, was ofcourse just a normal pig. The pig he wanted to be.

For a couple of months he worked on his machine before it was finally finished.
He called his machine the 'Brain Swap-o-matic''.
Now, the time has come to use the machine.
He pushed a normal pig onto the platform that was part of his machine. When the pig was completely on the platform, a fence raised so that the pig could not escape.
The intelligent pig pulled a lever and slowly a big iron cap with a huge tube that was connected to the machine dropped on the normal pig's head.
The intelligent pig also placed a big iron cap on his head and he pushed a big red button.

The machine began to make some noises and after several minutes a green light started to blink. The process was finished.
The intelligent pig quickly removed his cap, but... nothing changed.
He wondered what could've gone wrong, but there was nothing he could think of.
Dissapointed, he released the normal pig by lowering the fence. But instead of running away, the normal pig walked towards him.. and spoke.
''You think that you're smarter than us. But you aren't. We can all speak and think for ourselves, but we don't want to. That's why we act as 'normal' pigs. You should do the same and you would if you weren't so dumb. All pigs can act like 'normal' pigs, except you. I guess, you just want to be different.
Now please, for our sakes, go talk to a human and be famous. But don't tell them the secret of the pigs. It would ruin your fame, because you won't be special anymore and it would ruin our lifestyle.''

There he stood. He tought he was an exception.. and he was. But not in the way that he thought before.

Our friend followed the advice that was given to him and he became very powerful in the human society.
You've probably heard of him. His name was Hitler.
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PostSubject: Re: The intelligent pig   2/16/2010, 11:03 am

I liked ur story it kept me reading VERVE-FAME!!

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PostSubject: Re: The intelligent pig   2/16/2010, 11:08 am

Fiaman wrote:
I liked ur story it kept me reading VERVE-FAME!!

Well, thank you Smile
I don't know why i wrote it. I wanted to post something in 'Random Shmandom' and started writing.. and writing.. and writing :p
So yeah, i just copied it and posted it here.
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PostSubject: Re: The intelligent pig   2/16/2010, 4:11 pm

MH16 wrote:
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PostSubject: Re: The intelligent pig   2/16/2010, 5:18 pm

[quote="DarkKingBernard"]
MH16 wrote:
Hitler

Did you actually read the story?
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PostSubject: Re: The intelligent pig   2/17/2010, 4:06 am

[quote="MH16"]
DarkKingBernard wrote:
MH16 wrote:
Hitler

Did you actually read the story?

Umm i did before i posted
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PostSubject: Re: The intelligent pig   2/17/2010, 4:35 am

[quote="DarkKingBernard"]
MH16 wrote:
DarkKingBernard wrote:
MH16 wrote:
Hitler

Did you actually read the story?

Umm i did before i posted

Ok, thanks for the input then. It was very useful. Neutral
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PostSubject: Re: The intelligent pig   2/17/2010, 9:27 pm

This reminds me of fiaman. Only he knows why.

PS: It has to do with not wanting to talk about spirits lol
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PostSubject: Re: The intelligent pig   2/17/2010, 10:23 pm

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This reminds me of fiaman. Only he knows why.

PS: It has to do with not wanting to talk about spirits lol
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Umm.. .whaaa?

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PostSubject: Re: The intelligent pig   2/18/2010, 4:49 am

Fiaman wrote:
FallNsparrow wrote:
This reminds me of fiaman. Only he knows why.

PS: It has to do with not wanting to talk about spirits lol
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Umm.. .whaaa?

Haha, what? :p
Also, pig
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