Black Day Lyrics

This Is Some lyrics that i plan to use on some of my future track , some people see this lyrics with a "positive" Message other ones see them as "sad". Although This is unfinished i will finish them someday.

( the song pretty goes on Em,D,Bm,C)
(the bridge goes C, D,Em)

#INTRO

This is the day the sun will not shine
You will remember this for all your life
This is the day your dreams
won't come come back

I can see you.....
Now Welcome to my life

#VERSE 1

This is the Day You will
Open Your Eyes
The otherside
You never wish to saw

The things you could have done
in the past
They're gone now
look you waste your time

#BRIDGE

But here i am
Here i stand
But look at me

I can see you....
Welcome to my life

I am pretty stuck at the chorus, but i will try to complete this year, so what do you think ?

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

is it a slowly sang song? lol..there aren't that many lyrics to it. Anyway, i like the idea of it, it sounds good.

Admin wrote:

is it a slowly sang song? lol..there aren't that many lyrics to it. Anyway, i like the idea of it, it sounds good.

120 bpm, so let's say it's at the " normal" speed range, i plan to use only piano and a few strings

oh well that's cool then, keep at it though. If they're good now they'll only keep gettin' better

Be best suited for piano and maybe an acoustic.

hey guys i have uploaded a little lyrics test for this track:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/301585