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PostSubject: Progress [Poem]   4/17/2010, 7:23 pm

After all these days,
all these years,
I've found a cure to wipe my tears.

Of course i won't be happy all the time,
but at least i can truly say 'I'm doing fine'.

All this time i've just been hiding from myself,
i think i was afraid.
But i know now that i shouldn't be,
because of the progress that i've made.

Thank you girl,
who has made me aware.
You didn't even have to do much,
i just thank you for being there.

And i know things didn't work out between us,
and it's probably better this way.
No, i just want to thank you.
That's all i have to say.
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PostSubject: Re: Progress [Poem]   4/18/2010, 2:21 pm

I thought it was written well. The rhyming sounded good, and it also had a story you could follow along. The little story kept it interesting.

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PostSubject: Re: Progress [Poem]   4/19/2010, 2:26 pm

What's this all about? Rolling Eyes

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PostSubject: Re: Progress [Poem]   4/24/2010, 6:37 pm

GOTHCLAWZ wrote:
What's this all about? Rolling Eyes

That's a long story..

Oh and Dkb, it's really easy to talk trash about things other people make. Try making something yourself, you uncreative, immature little kid.
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PostSubject: Re: Progress [Poem]   4/29/2010, 10:10 am

quote="Mussirus"]That's a long story..[/quote]

GOTHCLAWZ wrote:
Go on...

Well, i can make a long story short.
I was living my life and accepted it the way it was.
Then a girl came along and i really liked her. We dated, but it didn't work out.
However, when things were back to 'normal' again i realized that i wasn't the person who i wanted to be and that i didn't led the life i wanted to live.
I started changing myself and with that my life, making myself a bit happier everyday. That's the progress i was talking about and it's not over yet. However, i am way more happier than before.
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PostSubject: Re: Progress [Poem]   5/6/2010, 3:05 pm

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