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PostSubject: Serenation   5/1/2010, 9:35 pm

I wrote this for a special girl

Serenation

Ive taken to this
Im addicted to please
I am enraged by this phase
And not will i deny
A life without love is a lie;
Slingshotting up and down
Losing my rounds
Stumbling all around
In this lonely town
But I remain in the fight
During hell tonight

Frailly focused
Yet keeping my eye on the prize
I've seen pain, sorrow and hate
But love hasnt been a loyal mate
And I regretfully say
I have yet to win this game
For nows no time to celebrate
Concentration I must maintain
Whilst being keen and ascertain
Understand misfortune and mistake
Made me who I am today
The man of yesterday cant change tomorrow
Because hes history

But all along
What I've been lookin' for is you
Without it I cease to move
Life would be too blue
To move on without you
So listen close
As I take these blows
With a broken nose
It just goes to show
To me you mean the most

I've fallen from the top
Im down to my last drop
But I refuse to stop
Because my goal is on lock
These feelings are not synthetic
The attractions magnetic
And your beauty is my anesthetic

The knock-out punchs set to jettison
Like an animation
With one last comparison
From A humble son
Perfections quite from prominent
And in that Im confident
So never seek out that accomplishment

My energys no longer on a leash
As I grit my teeth and just unleash
Strike after strike
Switch after switch
And lick after lick
Im down on my knees
Too painful to even breathe
But staying true to my creed
For you're all I need

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PostSubject: Re: Serenation   5/1/2010, 10:11 pm

pretty good dude. if we ever start a band. you'll definatly contribute a lot to lyrics Cool

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PostSubject: Re: Serenation   5/2/2010, 1:10 am

Jomadx wrote:
pretty good dude. if we ever start a band. you'll definatly contribute a lot to lyrics Cool
We're starting a band. And tell brad my cars broek down and to give u my 5 bucks ill get it from u

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PostSubject: Re: Serenation   5/2/2010, 4:10 am

Be a rapper!
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PostSubject: Re: Serenation   5/2/2010, 10:21 am

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Be a rapper!
That im good at as well. I want to be musician i eat breath and smoke weed, influencing me to be what no one man can be.

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PostSubject: Re: Serenation   5/2/2010, 12:57 pm

Fiaman wrote:
DarkKingBernard wrote:
Be a rapper!
That im good at as well. I want to be musician i eat breath and smoke weed, influencing me to be what no one man can be.

a singing bud?

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PostSubject: Re: Serenation   5/2/2010, 4:20 pm

Jomadx wrote:
Fiaman wrote:
DarkKingBernard wrote:
Be a rapper!
That im good at as well. I want to be musician i eat breath and smoke weed, influencing me to be what no one man can be.

a singing bud?
lol a singing bud that be sweet till it got smoked

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PostSubject: Re: Serenation   5/2/2010, 4:51 pm

Fiaman wrote:
Jomadx wrote:
Fiaman wrote:
DarkKingBernard wrote:
Be a rapper!
That im good at as well. I want to be musician i eat breath and smoke weed, influencing me to be what no one man can be.

a singing bud?
lol a singing bud that be sweet till it got smoked

i would smoke it, and then have all it's magical powers

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PostSubject: Re: Serenation   5/3/2010, 12:20 am

alright well lets get back to the subject this is my poem what u think

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