Fiaman
Bangkok
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Age : 33
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 |  Subject: i wrote a song with no title 5/2/2010, 4:26 pm | |
| For when You need Me
I just want to hold you
And nothing can compare to
The feeling you give me
Not just one, but plenty
So when you're down
Look for me to lift you up
And if I'm not around
Say the word and I'll come
A simple conversation is all it takes
And everytime it takes my breathe away
The right things I dont always say
But never will I take a break
So when you're on your own
Look for me to lift you up
And when im not around
Say the word and I'll run
Leaves are not fallin' this season
But thats no reason
To stand still
Because All your needs I'll fulfill
Honesty comes so softly
And honestly I dont live in secrecy
So please believe me
When I indeed say
I'll be there everyday
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Mussirus
Italia Ferrari
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Age : 32
Location : Holland
| | Subject: Re: i wrote a song with no title 5/2/2010, 6:25 pm | |
| I love it. Seriously!  Can i suggest a song title? ''For when you need me'' | |
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Fiaman
Bangkok
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Join date : 2009-12-21
Age : 33
Location : Charlotte
| | Subject: Re: i wrote a song with no title 5/2/2010, 6:43 pm | |
| - Mussirus wrote:
- I love it.
Seriously!
Can i suggest a song title?
''For when you need me'' Ty for your title. I've named it the winner.  Verve Fame for you. I wrote it in 20 minutes. Didn't know if it would be good or not so i didn't name it. | |
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