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Mussirus Italia Ferrari
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| Subject: Progress [Poem] 4/17/2010, 7:23 pm | |
| After all these days, all these years, I've found a cure to wipe my tears.
Of course i won't be happy all the time, but at least i can truly say 'I'm doing fine'.
All this time i've just been hiding from myself, i think i was afraid. But i know now that i shouldn't be, because of the progress that i've made.
Thank you girl, who has made me aware. You didn't even have to do much, i just thank you for being there.
And i know things didn't work out between us, and it's probably better this way. No, i just want to thank you. That's all i have to say. | |
| | | Jomadx Like a Boss!
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| Subject: Re: Progress [Poem] 4/18/2010, 2:21 pm | |
| I thought it was written well. The rhyming sounded good, and it also had a story you could follow along. The little story kept it interesting. | |
| | | Conal 1337
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| Subject: Re: Progress [Poem] 4/19/2010, 2:26 pm | |
| What's this all about? | |
| | | Mussirus Italia Ferrari
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| Subject: Re: Progress [Poem] 4/24/2010, 6:37 pm | |
| - GOTHCLAWZ wrote:
- What's this all about?
That's a long story.. Oh and Dkb, it's really easy to talk trash about things other people make. Try making something yourself, you uncreative, immature little kid. | |
| | | Mussirus Italia Ferrari
Posts : 479 Prestige : 5981 Verve-Fame : 94 Join date : 2010-01-05 Age : 31 Location : Holland
| Subject: Re: Progress [Poem] 4/29/2010, 10:10 am | |
| quote="Mussirus"]That's a long story..[/quote] - GOTHCLAWZ wrote:
- Go on...
Well, i can make a long story short. I was living my life and accepted it the way it was. Then a girl came along and i really liked her. We dated, but it didn't work out. However, when things were back to 'normal' again i realized that i wasn't the person who i wanted to be and that i didn't led the life i wanted to live. I started changing myself and with that my life, making myself a bit happier everyday. That's the progress i was talking about and it's not over yet. However, i am way more happier than before. | |
| | | Fiaman Bangkok
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| Subject: Re: Progress [Poem] 5/6/2010, 3:05 pm | |
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