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PostSubject: the simplest word   5/7/2010, 3:45 pm

Hey what all am new.umm this is my first post and id like to know what u all think.thanks

The Simplest Word

am sittin here thinkin
how we came this far?
it started out a simple,
hello
how did we end up callin each other
every nightin a row


how did hello
turn into i love u
how did hello
turn into i need u


the simplest talk
turned in to something more
wasnt even looking for
love or affection
been down that road before
didnt think it was for me
till i found u
and made me believe


how did hello
turn into i love u
how did hello
turn into i need u


was set in my ways
didnt have time for
bullshit attraction
believe when i say
ive change the way
i think and do
and its all cause of u

how did hello
turn into i love u
how did hello
turn into i need u
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PostSubject: Re: the simplest word   5/7/2010, 4:23 pm

I liek it, its sweet, and meaningful without being to complex. I wonder who its for?

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PostSubject: Re: the simplest word   5/7/2010, 4:31 pm

The concept of the literature is rather intriguing, just out of interest; could you explain to me why you chose the title "The Simplest Word"? Because I couldn't quite comprehend the single word that the title could be referring to.

Is this describing how people become attracted to each other for reasons of which they cannot colligere?

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PostSubject: Re: the simplest word   5/7/2010, 4:34 pm

Its about relationships gothclawz, dont you get it?

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PostSubject: Re: the simplest word   5/7/2010, 4:36 pm

Fiaman wrote:
Its about relationships gothclawz, dont you get it?
Is "relationships" the "Simplest Word"?

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PostSubject: Re: the simplest word   5/7/2010, 4:37 pm

GOTHCLAWZ wrote:
could you explain to me why you chose the title "The Simplest Word"?

I think she is referring to ''Hello''.

But yeah, i liked the poem and the message that it carries Smile
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PostSubject: Re: the simplest word   5/7/2010, 5:33 pm

yeah it was the word hello think about it. in every type of relationship the first word is hello.but this particular poem is about a love and amazing effects it can have on a person.

fiaman its for this guy that am completely head over heels in love with .but we have a bit of a differant kinda relationship than most.thanks for askin anyways


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PostSubject: Re: the simplest word   5/7/2010, 5:39 pm

tomkat wrote:
yeah it was the word hello think about it. in every type of relationship the first word is hello.but this particular poem is about a love and amazing effects it can have on a person.

fiaman its for this guy that am completely head over heels in love with .but we have a bit of a differant kinda relationship than most.thanks for askin anyways
Oh thanks for the information, glad to know. Hope you recieve lots of happiness from him.

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PostSubject: Re: the simplest word   5/21/2010, 5:01 pm

Very nice first post, and poem. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: the simplest word   5/21/2010, 6:29 pm

Indeed it is spunky.

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