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PostSubject: Sweet Redemption   6/20/2010, 12:00 am

"A throwback of mine i redesigned a bit.

Redemption

I was wrong
I'm sorry, please excuse my actions
You knew it was me all along
I wish I didn't have this type of reaction
But you knew, you foreseen the impact
I was a fool to believe I could change you
You'll always remain intact
You'll never break, no matter what I do
You're just a woman
One who’s mindset never repeats
You buried your traumas' in the sand
I tried to dig them up for my own retreat
I know you're watching me
You always stayed true to your word
You know it wasn't planned this way, I'm sorry
And as you glared at me in tears you said "Goodbye World."
Why did I do this
I watched you lying face down
I said to myself "I'll never allow anyone else to pay for my risks"
I've left all my shame behind me now
Men cant predict their future
Otherwise less mistakes would be made
We must take pride with virtue
And watch our backs to prevent darker days
We should not try to change other people
I've learned the hard way
Leave the changes to the steeple
I learned that as I watched you pay...

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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Redemption   6/20/2010, 12:07 am

some pretty deep stuff dude

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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Redemption   6/20/2010, 12:41 pm

Jomadx wrote:
some pretty deep stuff dude
Ty.

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