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PostSubject: Help   6/21/2010, 4:36 pm

"Help me Please"

I'm bitterly confused
Soul searching, self abused
This web I spin
With many a intersection
Is my creation
I wish I never existed
Then I would of never assisted
In the damage I've inflicted
I'm screaming inside
Thinning away my life
As adornments become my knife
This journeys soon coming to an end
For these wings I cant mend
I'm no angel, no friend
Bittersweet the memories
I find that are driving me crazy
This all plays into destiny
Why must i?!
Drown myself with lies
The truths still to hide
In my safest confide
I wish I could change
But forever this will stay
Its why i cant break the chain!
Someone save my soul
I'm weeping and cant console
Its now far beyond my control
Been conceded for to long
When I'm no more than wrong
Playing to the tune of this sad song
All along cradling the emotion I throng
I'm a sad man
I feel as if no one understands
I know I'm not the only one
But this is to much to comprehend
And its never done
Until our grains turn to sand
And the dust runs


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PostSubject: Re: Help   6/21/2010, 6:55 pm

that could be a smoke sunday song

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PostSubject: Re: Help   6/22/2010, 10:23 am

Im in depressed stage, thats hwy i wrote it.

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PostSubject: Re: Help   6/22/2010, 6:29 pm

I like the poem, although it is depressing.

But i have a question. Does writing help for you? I mean, sometimes writing helps me, because i can read back what i thought and understand what i need to do to solve certain problems better.
It's also a great stress reliever.

So what does (creative) writing mean to you?
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PostSubject: Re: Help   6/23/2010, 3:22 am

Mussirus wrote:
I like the poem, although it is depressing.

But i have a question. Does writing help for you? I mean, sometimes writing helps me, because i can read back what i thought and understand what i need to do to solve certain problems better.
It's also a great stress reliever.

So what does (creative) writing mean to you?
Listen to Hed PE they have opened my eyes, and it will answer ur question. We're all little shits compared toa big one WATCH LABYRINTH OF TRUTH OR THE WAKE UP PROJECT- TRUTH MOVEMENT fuck all the lies!!!!!! Im telling u now u might get freaked the fuck out i did. But its the truth

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