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Mussirus
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PostSubject: Know your place [Poem]   Know your place [Poem] Empty6/26/2010, 7:07 pm

You think you're always there, always reliable.
You think you are just undeniable.
But i know you better then you might think
And i know how you'll feel soon, like you're starting to sink.
All this time, you thought you were the best,
but that was just because, you had no real test.
You've always had it easy, received love from everyone.
But that's not how life goes, you'll find out, 'cause your life has just begun.
Don't think you're everything, the beginning and the end,
but with your ignorance, it'll be hard to comprehend.
You're nothing, you know, just a little dot
and if you don't agree with me you'll never find your spot.
You see, to be great you first have to be small
and you'll have to experience a very big fall.

Because when you fight back and show the world what you are made of,
when you fight back and show that you deserve
love,
then you can say that you are great, even though i think you won't anymore,
because you will remember, how small you were before.
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PostSubject: Re: Know your place [Poem]   Know your place [Poem] Empty6/27/2010, 12:12 am

Mussirus wrote:
You think you're always there, always reliable.
You think you are just undeniable.
But i know you better then you might think
And i know how you'll feel soon, like you're starting to sink.
All this time, you thought you were the best,
but that was just because, you had no real test.
You've always had it easy, received love from everyone.
But that's not how life goes, you'll find out, 'cause your life has just begun.
Don't think you're everything, the beginning and the end,
but with your ignorance, it'll be hard to comprehend.
You're nothing, you know, just a little dot
and if you don't agree with me you'll never find your spot.
You see, to be great you first have to be small
and you'll have to experience a very big fall.

Because when you fight back and show the world what you are made of,
when you fight back and show that you deserve
love,
then you can say that you are great, even though i think you won't anymore,
because you will remember, how small you were before.
Really good work man, I Like your stlye always makes since im more of an add style lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Know your place [Poem]   Know your place [Poem] Empty6/27/2010, 8:48 pm

Wow, very nice. I like the message here. It's clear and up front.
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PostSubject: Re: Know your place [Poem]   Know your place [Poem] Empty6/27/2010, 10:02 pm

WOOO alriiight i'm jammin' this is my new new this junk is sick now ooh i like this. good job man Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Know your place [Poem]   Know your place [Poem] Empty6/28/2010, 6:06 pm

Thank you all!
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PostSubject: Re: Know your place [Poem]   Know your place [Poem] Empty6/29/2010, 11:52 am

MUSSIRIUS wrote:
Thank you all!
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