poem i wrote

more keeps happening so i wrote this its called wanting out

I am a slob
no one will ever save me
Im thrust into situations i predicted
It seems I cant face the pain
I want out

Lifes just to hard
Giving up seems the only way
My nightmares have come alive
Once trapped, now running wild
I want out

Yes i want out
The suffering continues
And im to blind to realize
This flesh and bone bind me to life

Do you know that ive been there, Every single time
Do you know that im here right now?(X2)
I want out

(chorus)
Im drowning!!!
I cant swim to the surface!!!
Im sinking!!!!
losing this race!!!!
I dont matter anyway

Weakness grows
From all the love I've shown
Now the burdon shows
Im dying too slow(X2)

(chorus)

Ill be forgotten just like everyone else
Hurts to say but thats the way it'll stay
No more then a seashell
Being swept away only for another one to take its place

That's kind of a downer, isn't it?

Q wrote:

That's kind of a downer, isn't it?

well yes, im writing how i feel.

You want out.
You need some help.
And so you shout,
but in the wrong place.

If you feel like your life is miserable,
then don't ask help to the invisible.
I know, writing helps to get things off your chest,
but your problems won't give you any rest.

If you want your life to change,
then do something about it.
There's always a solution,
even though it can be hard, i admit.

Mussirus wrote:

You want out .... e hard, i admit.

Oh, do I smell a poem battle? :O

Q wrote:

Mussirus wrote:

You want out .... e hard, i admit.

Oh, do I smell a poem battle? :O

No, 'cause mine sucks.

Mussirus thats actually a song i wrote. I might want your lyrics, but to mod them a bit as well.