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PostSubject: Decision (Poem)   Decision (Poem) Empty1/19/2010, 5:40 pm

I didn't know what to do,
but i think i did it right.
I will be thinking about my decision though,
it'll keep me awake all night.

Decisions are so hard to make sometimes,
should i follow my head or my heart?
Or should i go for another solution,
and give both of them a part?

My mind tells me that it's pretty simple,
this decision can't cause much commotion.
But my heart tells me that i should take into account,
my feelings and emotion.

However, i have already found an answer
although it did cost me some time.
I'll know if i did the right thing eventually
but i think it'll be just fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Decision (Poem)   Decision (Poem) Empty1/19/2010, 10:29 pm

Seems like you could of used one more stanza to even it out a bit on the time and the future of it. But i liked it man it was good VERVE-FAAME FOR YOUUUUS! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Decision (Poem)   Decision (Poem) Empty1/19/2010, 10:58 pm

this time, when it comes to mind
nothing is sweeter than my little time
here with this sweet decision
my minds great with precision
and intuition


how about that? lolz
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PostSubject: Re: Decision (Poem)   Decision (Poem) Empty1/19/2010, 11:45 pm

first 3 liens rule last 2 epic fail. Laughing you Stoned yet josh ?
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PostSubject: Re: Decision (Poem)   Decision (Poem) Empty1/19/2010, 11:48 pm

Fiaman wrote:
first 3 liens rule last 2 epic fail. Laughing you Stoned yet josh ?

Decision (Poem) 91615 yeah lol, really
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