"A Song About God"

Thought I'd try my hand at this so called "song writing". Here goes:

*Acoustic guitar strums out a nice, relaxing beat*

Hey everybody! Gather round,
I have a song to sing and not much time,
I got a song to sing, and it's gonna rhyme!

*chorus*

It's a song about God,
it's a song about friends,
it's a song about love that never ever ends
*repeats*

*Verse 1*

I gotta wee,
but you gotta woo,
I like eatin' waffles
and you like 'em too!
So let's get in a fight,
it'll start in the day,
and end in the night.

*chorus*

*Verse 2*

Hey there buddy,
you better run!
'Cuz hey there buddy,
I got a gun!
I'm aiming at yer face,
so you better duck,
if I shot you in the face,
it would really, really suck.

*chorus*

*Verse 3*

My song is almost over,
I hope it was fun,
my song is almost over,
and now it is done...

*Acoustic guitar gently strums out a few chords before fading out*

I felt like a dumbass singing this.

Fiaman wrote:

I felt like a dumbass singing this.

Wait, you actually sang this out loud? Awesome. I'mma chalk this one up to a win.

Spunky6666 wrote:

Fiaman wrote:

I felt like a dumbass singing this.

Wait, you actually sang this out loud? Awesome. I'mma chalk this one up to a win.

Dammit i did too, How humiliating.

I didn't sing out loud, but i did sing it in my head :p
It's catchy

I'll see what i can do to make an actual song of this, with chords and all.
Can't promise anything though